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David Revoy

@ArneBab Thanks.

I had a revision of the story where the monster screaming was directly connected to an action of Cayenne. But then, it was hard to hide this to Pepper, and Pepper could see in that a direct sabotage. I preferred to disconnect the two.

Thanks for your words and your support again!

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Arne Babenhauserheide

@davidrevoy 10 years later:

Pepper: „When you found me with the Phoenix tears, how did you turn the monster?“

Cayenne: „I did not. Your anger did.“

Pepper: „My anger … you played me!“

Cayenne: „You played yourself. I just gave you the mirror to see. Also I don’t need to use my strength when yours is so readily available.“

Pepper: „You … ! Thank you. You still played me.“

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