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@davidrevoy Any specific parts you want us to focus on?

Like 24 Nov 2022 at 16:28 | Wall-to-wall | Open on hackers.town

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@yuki2501 Feel free to comment anything that went immediately to your mind when you saw it. Especially if it is in the type of feedback "oh.... it's too bad xxxxxxxxxx wasn't better done, the piece could have been so much better with yyyyyyyyyyyyyyy , or zzzzzzzzzzz really breaks the suspension of disbelief I need to feel this piece as immersive. "
Thanks!

24 Nov 2022 at 17:05 | Open on framapiaf.org

@davidrevoy Well, the grass field could use more detail but that's about it.

24 Nov 2022 at 17:38 | Open on hackers.town

@yuki2501 Thank you! Noted for next time.

24 Nov 2022 at 17:59 | Open on framapiaf.org

@davidrevoy You're welcome!

(In general I'm a sucker for details and rough plain areas kinda kill the immersion for me. Just adding some dirt or brown patches here and there would make me say something like "ooh a patch of arid land in that grass field!" instead of "meh, not enough effort.")

24 Nov 2022 at 18:09 | Open on hackers.town