There's just something wrong about Solinopolis. It doesn't work. It's not Tsukumizu's deserted multi-layer city, which worked. It's not Nihei's really massive Megastructure, which worked. I'm missing something in the worldbuilding.
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There's just something wrong about Solinopolis. It doesn't work. It's not Tsukumizu's deserted multi-layer city, which worked. It's not Nihei's really massive Megastructure, which worked. I'm missing something in the worldbuilding. 2 comments
@neauoire yeah, but that location with pipes of mine is not 9 paragraphs old. Anyway, I'm not having a creator crisis, I'm just iterating. Wait for me with a new attempt soon. |
@bouncepaw maybe Blame in 9 paragraphs might also not work