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bouncepaw 🍄

Lost in the Pipes

Wanted to write a short story about my #pipepunk city. Didn't finish it. You still might give it a go: melanocarpa.lesarbr.es/hypha/l

9 paragraphs

20 Jan 2023 at 16:49 | Open on merveilles.town
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bouncepaw 🍄

There's just something wrong about Solinopolis. It doesn't work. It's not Tsukumizu's deserted multi-layer city, which worked. It's not Nihei's really massive Megastructure, which worked. I'm missing something in the worldbuilding.

20 Jan 2023 at 16:51 | Open on merveilles.town
Devine Lu Linvega

@bouncepaw maybe Blame in 9 paragraphs might also not work

20 Jan 2023 at 16:52 | Open on merveilles.town
bouncepaw 🍄

@neauoire yeah, but that location with pipes of mine is not 9 paragraphs old. Anyway, I'm not having a creator crisis, I'm just iterating. Wait for me with a new attempt soon.

20 Jan 2023 at 16:55 | Open on merveilles.town
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