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bouncepaw 🍄

I don't like the whole psychic creature part. Too powerful for the setting and feels out of place. There could've been a different way to show Kamen's story.

Also I didn't really get how Levi made the plants make microlevis. Gene modification? They've got the equipment for that? Selection couldn't have worked for sure. Something else? I missed that part. Cool Levi though. I want to see more of their art.

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Mofongo

@bouncepaw I like the telepathy part. I find it very creative of a creature using telepathy to have other animals hunt or gather food for it. It's the telekinesis that I find too much.

Regarding Levi, I believe it's the fungus that inhabits Levi that reproduced and took on a Levi like shape.

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