@neauoire Have you seen sitelen sitelen? It's a writing system for toki pona based on arranging letters in blocks like you did:
https://jonathangabel.com/toki-pona/basic-sentences/
Admittedly it's more focused on making interesting drawings rather than being readable in my experience '^^
@opfez I have yeah :) It's neat, it has a Camilare vibe that I like.
https://wiki.xxiivv.com/site/camilare.html